#hope this post doesn't sound like I'm putting bad down ToT

[bigboobyhalo]

literally tubbo was INFINITELY scarier than BBH in purgatory . tubbo is better at PVP than bad, he got more kills overall than bad, he's better at strategizing than bad, he's more optimistic and determined than bad... when bad had completely given up on winning one day (the day that bounties were introduced), it was tubbo joining and coming up with a strategy that boosted soulfire's morale and lead them to victory !! bad's still a GREAT player, obviously, it's just that purgatory played more to tubbo's strengths than it did bad's, in my opinion, and people don't really acknowledge it

I think the difference is that bad was way more openly bloodthirsty than tubbo was and also willing to play a lot dirtier ... so bad was the one who got the reputation for being violent, and for spawncamping, and for just generally being a menace...

people just tend to be more afraid of a dog than of the owner holding onto it's leash, I guess

[count-von-kit]

Thankfully not much left to edit for Ch.3 from what I can tell. It doesn't seem like a lot (mostly just skimming over and finalizing), but the mental gymnastics it puts me through really takes a lot depending on my health. Originally I wanted to get through the last two scenes but fever and some bad tummy aches kind of pushed me back by a few hours.

Anyway, all I have left for Ch.3 of Abel's YTP is: Practice Scene: - Some minor words that need changing, along with an entire sweep through one last time. - Needs to review to make sure that Abel's recount of a specific incident reads through as something more than just a TLDR; experience. Pre-Concert Day: - Needs some minor word changes, along with an entire sweep through. It mostly reads fine, but I need to make sure shit flows a bit better.

Concert Night, Sound Check: - Just needs a sweep through, should overall be fine. Concert Night, Graduation: - Just needs a sweep through, should also be fine overall. It's a rather small skit that is mostly just Abel thinking. Concert Night, Concert Prep: - Should just need a sweep through. It's mostly just banter.

Concert Night, Actual Concert: - Dom's speech dialogue is fine. Just need to review some of the stuff unfolding on stage and make it a bit prettier. Concert Night, Post Concert: - There a bit here I'm trying to work on hammering out. It starts off fine, and it ends fine. It's just all the meat in the middle I gotta review before I can write it off as ok. Car Scene: - Just five little paragraphs I need to tidy up, and then give it another sweep over. But all together I think it's fine. This is what I was working on most of today. Dom's House: - I haven't even got to editing this bit. It still needs a lot of fine tuning, and there's also an entire scene I haven't yet inserted, though I am debating on if I want to place it here or in Ch.4. Placement wouldn't really matter too much given how often Abel falls into his thoughts, but while it was written with the intention of being put into Ch.3, it can still work just as well for Ch.4. Ch.3 is already pretty long, so I may decide to just slap it into Ch.4 and call it good. I have to review some happenings in Ch.4, however, before I can make that decision, which I will likely do once all of the above has been finish.

Overall, it feels like a lot only because of the number of scenes to this chapter, but it's kinda not. I just have to continue to have energy and be in the mood for sitting down to edit, which I'm hoping I'll have a break this upcoming week where I can. So fingers crossed, because I'd really like to finish Ch.3 before the end of the year. ToT